Saturday, November 8, 2014

Everything Happens For A Reason


Everything happens for a reason. You’ve heard the saying, right? Well, this applies to your story and characters too.

 

Why does the villain hate the hero?

Why is the hero guarding their heart?

Why does the child think winning the science fair will get his parents back together?

 

There has to be a reason for your character’s motivation. When you sat to write today, you did so with a reason, a purpose. You wanted to write a story to entertain, teach, earn money. Perfectly good reasons.

Go through your manuscript and pretend you have a four year old at your side asking, “Why?” every twelve seconds.  If you don’t have an answer as to why your character is doing something then maybe it is out of character or doesn’t move the story along.

Remember, EVERYTHING happens for a reason.

Saturday, November 1, 2014

Recipe for Being a Writer: Read, Write, Research, Repeat


Welcome to November 1st. The first day of PiBoIdMo. One picture book idea every day for the month of November.  But I want to be real with you. Not every idea is going to be an award winning, agent catching, dream story. Especially because of one important trend I’ve been seeing lately.

People aren’t doing anything with their ideas. I’ve been to writing classes where people have said, “I’ve had this idea for a few years now…”

Maybe we still have the middle school fear that makes us say, “If I don’t try, then I really didn’t fail.” That is bull hockey and we all know it.

If you want to be a writer, read, write, research, repeat. Say it with me - read, write, research, repeat.

Ideas are like good intentions-fabulous but worth very little when compared to using that idea and molding it into something.

It will take hard work, dedication, possibly some tears, possibly some grey hair, and a hidden chocolate bar. But do you want to have ideas or do you want to be a writer with ideas?

My personal goal this PiBoIdMo is to complete a rough draft once a week for one of my ideas.  I’m giving myself freedom to be horrible.  That’s okay. The first step to a great story is a craptacular first draft.  Some of those who like euphemisms call it Draft Zero. 

Write that draft! Take 20 minutes to take a step toward your goal. It’s also okay to let an idea sit for a while before writing.  I’m not saying that stewing over an idea is bad, just don’t let it stew for so long that there is nothing left but a dried up husk.

Happy writing my writing peeps! Take those ideas and get cooking! Remember the recipe for becoming a writer:

Read, Write, Research, Repeat
 

Sunday, October 19, 2014

It's Almost Time for PiBoIdMo

Can you smell it? Fall is in the air. Time for sweaters, hot cider, and more time indoors. That means it is the perfect time to get all those story ideas you've been toying with down on paper (or on the screen).

What? You don't have any Picture Book ideas right now? Well, you're in luck.  My favorite event is coming soon. Picture Book Idea Month aka PiBoIdMo.



The goal is one story idea per day.  Last year I exceeded my goal. Of the over thirty ideas only about three truly usable picture book ideas, and one magazine article idea stuck with me through multiple revisions and on to critique partners. I see that as a complete success and it was tons of fun.

There are prompts, which I love, and guest bloggers, and tons of support from the writing community. If you write picture books go check it out. I need to go decorate this year's PiBoIdMo Notebook. I'm thinking sparkles...

http://taralazar.com/piboidmo/

Sunday, October 5, 2014

What To Do After a Literary Conference

So you've attended a literary conference.  All the prep work perfecting that pitch, all the butterflies when you meet an author you idolize, the nerves of your critique with an editor.

 You've had a little time to decompress.

Ahh....

Now what?

First, lets get organized.

Who did you meet at the conference? If you received business cards input them into your contacts. Not very techie? Staple them to a piece of notebook paper with the date/conference you met them and a note or two about them. (i.e. email about critique when finished adoption story, she is interested in trading manuscripts. Or owns a farm and said he'd answer your question about horse feathers, frogs, and saddles.) It would help if you jot yourself a little note on the back of the card when you first get it.  You meet so many wonderful people and you think you'll remember all the details, but then your brain goes on conference overload.

Second, what agents or editors do you think are a match for your work?  Look them up in your info packet and make note of their submission guidelines. I've seen deadlines of 3 weeks and I've seen no deadline/don't send until it is polished.  For ones with date cut offs, make a note in your calendar. Give yourself time to polish but don't lose out on an open submission just because you forgot a date.

Which leads me to the Third step.  Compile the info that is going to help you with your current WIP. Review, get it fresh in your head, and write/revise.

You can't be a writer if you don't write. So write.  Right now...Go. Okay, finish reading this and then go write.

Before this last conference I held off sending my most polished pieces of work off to agents (mostly due to fear if I'm being honest) because I wanted to see if there was anything at this conference that I could apply to make them better.  For most of my work, absolutely, from teeny tiny tweaks to holy crap I just had an epiphany on how to completely rework this story to make it sing.

These conferences have built my confidence and taught me new things with each I've attended.  If you haven't gone, I highly recommend them.  If you've been, you can still learn more at another. Consider them continuing education for your writing career.

So I'm off to write, revise, critique, and send some queries. *shudder* The scary part of writing in my opinion. Happy writing.

Seriously..... GO WRITE!


Sunday, September 21, 2014

I'm Back


So things got a little crazy for a while.  Family member in a car wreck, kid starting school, and agent requesting to see some more of my work (Yes, I did a little Snoopy dance when that happened) and conferences to prep for.
 

                Life gets in the way sometimes and we can’t do everything. Unless you have a time machine or a cloning machine. If you do please share so others can be super heroes too.

                Writers, please take time to take care of yourself, your family, then your writing. I shouldn’t have to remind you, but I’m a mother hen – so there.

                Good news though: One agent expressed interest in my work, then at a conference another agent heard a pitch for a completely different picture book and said it would be easy to find a house.  I’ll be doing revisions and sending that to her soon.  This is in no way a guarantee of landing an agent.  I know this. But it was a great boost to my confidence and has made me less afraid of sending out the dreaded query letter.

                Let’s face it. It is fun and usually easy to write in our basements, away from prying eyes, and we love/hate/love it. But to send those babies out into the world where there could be ridicule, indifference, or rejection.  It’s hard. It’s scary. It’s plain ol’ not fun. Sometimes, after a handful of form rejections all it takes is one kind personalized rejection to make us happy. (Seriously, I keep the personal rejections in their own special folder to remind myself that I’m not completely crappy with this whole words-on-paper thing.)

                To have not one but two positive things (even though nothing is solid) is a boost. If this doesn’t pan out, will I be sad? Yes, I’ll pout and then I’ll get over it.  If something great comes out of it will I celebrate? ABSO-FLIPPING-LOUTLY. With ice cream and horribly embarrassing Snoopy dancing around my kitchen.
 

                So what is the point of this?  I’ll remind you that I’ve been working on this words-on-paper thing seriously for years. I have had works that I've revised 30 times. I’m too stubborn to give up and freakishly optimistic. I could find the silver lining to a bunny-zombie-apocalypse. If you love writing, stick with it. If it was meant to happen it will. Patience is a virtue.  A really hard to remember and frustrating virtue.  But go to classes, conferences, join a critique group with people you trust enough to say, “Shred this apart like a rabid Tasmanian devil,” to. Practice, Practice, Practice.
 
                One speaker at the last SCBWI conference wrote 49, yes 49, novels before he got an agent and published his work.  That’s not the worse part.  His wife wrote 1.  Yup. ONE.  Some people will see that prize of their book on a shelf nauseatingly early.  Most of us have to hit a couple dozen foul balls before we see that home run. There is a saying, “Don’t let fear of striking out keep you from playing the game."

 

Monday, July 28, 2014

The Writer Blog Hop


 

Hey there writing Peeps. The writing community is playing a game of tag known as the Writer Blog Hop. Jenni (see her post here) has tagged me.  So I’m ‘it’ and here is my post answering their questions.

 



What am I working on/writing?

My focus is Picture Books.  At any given time I have about three stories that are at the forefront of my mind.  The Primary is a non-fiction about working animals.  The story balances the goal of the animal, from their point of view, along with the facts about the animal’s job and training. My goal is to keep it under 800 words

My fiction works are funny, silly, and sparse. My secondary focus is a story of a child who refuses to have a pet, even though his parents want one. Keeping it under 300 words. I love Picture Books for their ability to weave an amazing story without any wasted words.

 

How does my work/writing differ from others of its genre?

I am an eclectic person and my writing style is the same.  I like to look at things from other angles.  I want to know both sides of the story. I like to try different techniques. I am comfortable looking into darker issues, like loss, and equally comfortable acting like a clown. My characters are willing to do the same.

 

Why do I write what I do?

I’ve always been a dreamer.  Long car rides could give me the time to build entire worlds in my head. As a child, books were my safe haven, they were constant.  No matter where you moved, there is a library. No matter what you are curious about, there is a book written on the subject.  Books can help you escape. Books can help you find yourself.

I write for children because I want to inspire a child to love books.  I want to create stories that are fun, entertaining, engaging, and if the child learns something, they don’t even notice that they were learning. Non-fiction can be entertaining too!

I write to, hopefully, make children happy.

 

How does my writing process work?


 

My process is simple. I dream. My best ideas come on quiet Saturday mornings. I listen to birds, watch my dogs play, and just let my mind wander before my family is up and about.  Then an idea starts to form… sometimes.

Other times ideas just pop up like stray animals. You weren’t expecting to find them, but now that it followed you home, you have to keep it, clean it up, and show it off.

After the idea hits, I like to hand write rough drafts.  My mind works a little slower when writing on paper and this helps a scatterbrain like me focus.

Sometimes there are web diagrams or lists to help get my ideas in order. Other times the words flow like candy from a piƱata.

Next, I enter it onto my computer and edit/change/add/whatever as I go. 

Then rewrite…cut… revise… wait….wait some more… look at it again, while trying to be objective… hit head against desk a few times…love it/hate it… edit again.

Read to my family, for only the most obvious corrections and the needed pats on the back that family gives you even when you suck aren’t quite there yet.

Finally, to the critique groups! This step is so important.  They will find the missing commas, the ‘there’ that was supposed to be ‘their’ and the apple pie desert that spell check didn’t tell you was there (Unless you wanted a barren apple pie). But more importantly they will help you with pacing, character development, letting you know if the words you paint with created the picture you were going for. Critique partners are vital to getting your work agent/editor ready.

 

Want to know more?

Odd Facts:

I don’t do everything in the same order.  Sometimes, I like to revise backwards so that I truly look at each paragraph separate from the story (I doubt I could do this for a novel, but for Picture Books it works).

I am involved in more than one critique group and not afraid to hand my work to anyone willing to read and literally say, “Tell me what you hate about this, so I know what to fix.”

I get so lost in books that I walk into things while reading.  If you aren't reading, then you probably aren’t really writing either. They go hand in hand.
 
I frequently write in a Snuggy.  Yes- a Snuggy.  It is warm and I'm always cold. Don't Judge. :-)

My debut Picture Book DONNA IS EVIL will be out next month with MeeGenius. Check it out.


That's it for my fun game.  Now I tag Eugenia Sozzi. You're it!

Wednesday, July 9, 2014

What's in a name?

A rose by any other name would smell as sweet, right? Well, that depends.  Would you even smell it if the name was Manure Flower?



What about Death Star? Works for a ship, but not a flower. 

So what do the names you choose tell me about your characters?

Blake Irwin could be the next Indiana Jones.  Hubert Copperbottom IV? Not so much, but he could be the great and wise wizard. 

If you name your heroine Sandy Shorts, you better be writing a comedy.  It would be hard for her to get a job as a lawyer in your book. 

I want to be able to pronounce the names I read, as well.  They can still be alien names, or names from other countries. Just be conscious of being able to say it out loud.  The blue alien Cronkle Borg can be spoken about out loud.  The pink alien WHLYQUAZYVLOBLE? Well, I doubt I'll be telling any of my friends about her story. 

Think about your names.  These books are like your children and they will live with them their whole lives.

So your writing prompt of the week is to tell me about one of the following characters.  Who are they? What kind of job do they have? What was their mother like? What are their hobbies, hopes, dreams?

Blake Irwin
Hubert Copperbottom
Chrysalis Meadows
Andrew Hawks
Aszure Jacobs
Griffin Arnold

Make up your own if you don't like mine.  But think of the last time there was a president named Bob (Hint: Never) or James (Hint: Six).  Names can be ironic but they still need to be believable.